We’re back with the second in our series of guest posts from recent Supreme Court of Virginia clerk and avid water skier Tommy Strelka. Today, Tommy shares some more things that his clerkship taught him about brief writing:
- Ditch the hyperbole. Your appeal from your client’s sixth conviction of shoplifting probably does not amount to “a case of extreme jurisprudential and meritorious weight.” Don’t oversell. You will lose credibility.
- Use the correct number of assignments of error. A petition for appeal with forty-five assignments of error is either a petition for appeal from a death penalty sentence or it is a poorly written brief. Most cases on appeal have only a handful of truly relevant and contested issues of law. You can obscure the main thrust of your argument by addressing far too many issues.
- Craft your assignments of error with care. You define the scope of your client’s appeal. When you submit an assignment of error or question presented, you are effectively setting the bounds of your argument. But be sure not to paint yourself in a corner. Every word matters in an assignment of error. Ask yourself, “What is the real legal issue at the heart of my case?” Boil it down to a single statement and write it down. If you knew nothing about this case and another attorney read this statement, would that attorney still understand the argument of law?
I’m enjoying Tommy’s guest posts, and I hope that you are as well. Clerks have the ear of justices, and they are a primary audience for our briefs. It helps to know what they find persuasive and annoying.
Also, I like the goofy pictures he comes up with.
ommy is currently a trial lawyer at Strickland, Diviney & Strelka in Roanoke. A Mary Washington and Richmond Law grad, he’s also clerked for Judge Turk in the Western District of Virginia. The opinions and practice tips expressed in this post are solely those of the author. They do not represent the opinions of any member of the Supreme Court of Virginia or any other Court–or, for that matter, any right-thinking person.
Civil procedure nerds and defense counsel, rejoice! (I am looking at you,
Shapiro brought a landlord-tenant suit against Younkin in general district court, proceeding pro se. He lost and appealed to the circuit court, where he also appeared pro se. The court’s local rules required that a court reporter be present at all civil trials, and that a party appealing a GDC case arrange to have a court reporter present at the circuit court trial.
And we’re back after a short holiday break. I hope that you all were able to take a little time out of your schedules to enjoy the season.